Talk:75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event
75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event is currently a Sports good article nominee. Nominated by Pharaoh496 (talk) at 19:14, 7 June 2024 (UTC) Anyone who has not contributed significantly to (or nominated) this article may review it according to the good article criteria to decide whether or not to list it as a good article. To start the review process, click start review and save the page. (See here for the good article instructions.) Short description: Diplomatic Cricket Event |
75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event was nominated as a Sports and recreation good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (January 13, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Phlsph7 (talk · contribs) 10:26, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
Hello Pharaoh496 and thanks for almost single-handedly writing this article. Unfortunately, about half the content in the body of the article is unreferenced. Examples are the paragraphs starting with "Foreign diplomatic relations between Australia and India are well-established", "PM Albanese visited India in March 2023. During the visit, he also led a trade delegation", and "In 1996, the Border-Gavaskar Trophy was created, a test series". This fails the GA criterion 2b, which states that text in the body of the article should have citations no later than the end of the paragraph
. This should be addressed before a renomination. A few other observations:
- Ideally, the first sentence should start with a definition, see MOS:LEADSENTENCE. It could start with "75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event was an event..." or something similar.
- Why does every single picture have Modi and Albanese in it? More variety would be better.
In first innings Usman Khawaja and
add "the" before "first" and add a comma after "innings"In the first innings, Shubman Gill and
a little repetitive since the sentence before the previous sentence starts the same wayrespectively, In result Australia
the comma should probably be a period
Phlsph7 (talk) 10:26, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
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