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:there is no connection to what the current topic sentence describes as the subject of the article: the three unrelated attacks that lead to spike in search for "zombie apocalypse" in early June . see [[WP:COATRACK]] and [[WP:SYN]]. If you can develop a topic/subject sentence that is supported by reliable sources that would legitimately encompass this incident, feel free to suggest it here. the Independent might support a move to [[2012 face chewing incidents]] and a re-write of the article-- [[User talk:TheRedPenOfDoom|<span style="color:red;font-size:small;;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;">The Red Pen of Doom</span>]] 11:11, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
:there is no connection to what the current topic sentence describes as the subject of the article: the three unrelated attacks that lead to spike in search for "zombie apocalypse" in early June . see [[WP:COATRACK]] and [[WP:SYN]]. If you can develop a topic/subject sentence that is supported by reliable sources that would legitimately encompass this incident, feel free to suggest it here. the Independent might support a move to [[2012 face chewing incidents]] and a re-write of the article-- [[User talk:TheRedPenOfDoom|<span style="color:red;font-size:small;;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;">The Red Pen of Doom</span>]] 11:11, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
::Does the current topic sentence really describe the article? Because there is only two sentences about the "Zombie Apocalypse". The article is mostly about recent acts of cannibalism, (which I personally think the articles subject should be). If there was more about the zombie apocalypse, I think people might stop asking to put up new incidents. [[User:Wikipediman23|Wikipediman23]] ([[User talk:Wikipediman23|talk]]) 13:37, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
::Does the current topic sentence really describe the article? Because there is only two sentences about the "Zombie Apocalypse". The article is mostly about recent acts of cannibalism, (which I personally think the articles subject should be). If there was more about the zombie apocalypse, I think people might stop asking to put up new incidents. [[User:Wikipediman23|Wikipediman23]] ([[User talk:Wikipediman23|talk]]) 13:37, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
:::No one has offered a better sentence. Do you have one? If so, please offer your suggestion up above [[Talk:Incidents_of_zombie-like_behavior_in_2012#statement_of_subject_of_article_and_article_title]] or else trim the crap out of the article which doesnt belong. I have tried, but it keeps getting put back in.-- [[User talk:TheRedPenOfDoom|<span style="color:red;font-size:small;;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;">The Red Pen of Doom</span>]] 13:38, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

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verification needed

I removed this from the article

The Daily Beast created a Google Map of the incidents that they claim "may be the precursor to a zombie apocalypse."[1]

While the AP states there is a connection to The Daily Beast, the actual map is made by "Sam". Do we have any verification of actual connection of map to The Daily Beast? -- The Red Pen of Doom 14:02, 8 June 2012 (UTC)[]

It's legit: http://www.thedailybeast.com/articles/2012/05/31/map-signs-of-the-zombie-apocalypse.htmlBdb484 (talk) 19:53, 8 June 2012 (UTC)[]

I think it's inclusion is vital to the meaning and clarity of the article. If it's not in, we might as well delete the entire thing.HMKRich (talk) 14:05, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[]

what exactly is the meaning of the article? as stated now, based on the sources, it is a google trend of "zombie apocolypse" - I don't see how this is vital to that at all. -- The Red Pen of Doom 16:51, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[]

This does seem like a pointless article. 119.145.248.158 (talk) 14:53, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Should not his crime (the murder of Lin Jun) also be added to this article? I thought that there were zombie elements or some cannibalism involved. No? I may be mistaken, however. Any thoughts? Thanks. Joseph A. Spadaro (talk) 23:20, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[]

I was responding to the empty section header, but I see that you have added a comment.
Although actions allegedly committed by him in a recent murder occurred around the time of the "Florida face eater" incident, I do not see any indication of "zombie-like" behavior. Cannibalism has not been conclusively shown. His actions after the incident also are not zombie-like. Taroaldo (talk) 23:27, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I should add that if you feel you have enough info to make a case for its inclusion, then be bold and add away! Taroaldo (talk) 23:32, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I am not that familiar with the case. Off the top of my head, I thought that I had recalled that he killed the man, dismembered him, and ate body parts (all while on film). Like I said, I could be wrong. Thanks. Joseph A. Spadaro (talk) 02:12, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[]
The video apparently shows all of what you mention, except for the cannibalism. That seems to have been inferred based on the actions of the person in the video (using a knife and fork), but no consumption was shown. Taroaldo (talk) 02:19, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[]

it is not included because there are no sources connecting it to whatever the supposed subject of this supposed article is. -- The Red Pen of Doom 03:02, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Follow up

As I had originally suspected, there was indeed cannibalism involved. This Associated Press source indicates cannibalism. See: Jun Lin's Head May Have Been Found In Montreal. The article states: "A second, unedited version of the video seen by police shows him eating parts of the body." Thanks. Joseph A. Spadaro (talk) 17:14, 2 July 2012 (UTC)[]

And? Without a consensus about what the subject of thei article is, it is premature to take any steps to include this incident. The subject of the article as currently defined is a number of incidents that led to a spike in the google search trends, and the Magnotta incident is not listed as one of the causes. see WP:SYN and WP:COATRACK.-- The Red Pen of Doom 17:34, 2 July 2012 (UTC)[]

Deletion of sourced descriptive material

Descriptions of the incidents which form the basis for this article should not be deleted (such as this edit, for example). Such descriptions are NOTSYNTH and have been included appropriately and in good faith. Taroaldo (talk) 20:07, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[]

WP:SYN "Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources." None of the original sources are connecting the individual crimes they cover to "zombies", to a google search trend for "zombie apocalypse", to a rash of cannibalistic acts or to whatever the purported subject of this article is. By their inclusion as sources in this article, Wikipedia editors are making the implication of such conclusions, eww these hideous crimes that happened in a short time frame must be zombies.
See also WP:COATRACK "The nominal subject is used as an empty coat-rack, which ends up being mostly obscured by the "coats". The existence of a "hook" in a given article is not a good reason to "hang" irrelevant and biased material there." Even if WP:SYN didnt apply COATRACK does for essentially the same reason. The subject of the article is not the details of the individual unrelated crimes, it is that they are supposedly related somehow, part of a zombie apocalypse or whatever the fuck this embarrassment of an article is supposed to be about. -- The Red Pen of Doom 01:54, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I understand your position, but I submit the difference between "zombie" and "zombie-like" is critical. The latter term is descriptive term which does not imply that Romero-esque zombies or Haitian-type zombies are involved. If someone shambles around in rags muttering "brains....brains" at Halloween, no one is going to think they are an actual zombie; that behavior would be described as "zombie-like". That is the same description used in this article, which was derived from numerous reliable sources. Sources which have used the term "zombie-like" to describe human behavior in different situations include: [1], [2], [3], [4], [5]. The descriptor is widely used in society to describe feelings associated with side effects of certain medications. As such, the use of the term "zombie-like" in the article is appropriate. Taroaldo (talk) 02:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]
THAT is complete and utter ridiculousness. And my point still stands: that Wikipedia editors CANNOT use sources and make connections to "zombie" OR "zombile-like" (whatever the fuck that may mean) where the original sources DO NOT. -- The Red Pen of Doom 09:02, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]

discussion in lieu of request for comment :subject and title and content

The community needs to determine a number of inter-related issues: 1) What is the actual subject of this article, ie "a declarative sentence telling the nonspecialist reader what (or who) the subject is."

2) What title appropriately describes the topic of the article.

3) Whether the subject of the article meets the notability reqirements, ie the subject of the article "has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject,"

4) How to determine what content can be included in the article without violating WP:SYN or WP:COATRACK.

discussion background

The article has had a number of names: Incidents of zombie-like behavior in 2012 and 2012 Zombie controversy.

The first AFD was closed as "rename" - although there was never a discussion or consensus on what the new name should be. It was just moved and there was discussion and no evidence presented that the new title/subject was actually in compliance with the WP:N standard. There was a second AfD which was closed as speedy, based solely on the fact that the previous AfD had occurred recently.

The article has had a number of lead sentences, among them:

  • "A series of unrelated[1] criminal events took place during the United States following May 26, 2012, which, according to CNN, led to "zombie apocalypse" becoming one of the top trending terms on the Google search engine on that Friday morning.[2] "
  • "In June of 2012, a string of unrelated incidents occurred that reminded some people of zombies."
  • The 2012 Zombie controversy is a name for a string of unrelated incidents that bearing characteristics that remind some people of zombies.
  • "The 2012 Zombie controversy sometimes called the "Zombie apocalypse"[1][2] is an internet and media controversy surrounding a string of macabre incidents which resemble "Zombie"-like characteristics. "
  • "A series of criminal events took place in the United States after May 26, 2012." (my personal favorite as exemplifying everything that is wrong with this article)

Several editors have repeatedly re-entered sources for content which merely describe details of the individual crimes, without any mention of the (non- )relation to the other crimes, to a google search or even to zombies (in fact one of the current ones specifically states "not a zombie").

This article is a complete mess and embarrassment to Wikipedia and needs to be addressed from the top down, starting with a consensus on what the actual topic of the article may be, down to what types of sourcing would provide valid content within Wikipedia's standards without violating WP:SYN and WP:COATRACK. -- The Red Pen of Doom 23:15, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[]

The description of the incidents within the article is directly related to the subject of the article, none of which is SYNTH. Perhaps the OP is confusing zombie behavior with zombie-like behavior, or they are inferring that the title suggests zombies of the kind envisioned by George A. Romero. This is simply not the case and, ironically, such a conclusion would actually be the item that would be considered SYNTH.
In any discussion where SYNTH is claimed, editors should also consider the following:
1) SYNTH is not an advocacy tool
2) SYNTH should not be enforced zealously
3) SYNTH is not ubiquitous
4) SYNTH is not a policy
5) SYNTH is not just any synthesis
The other issue that should be addressed is this RFC itself. Certain steps should be taken before initiating a RfC. These steps were not taken in this case. Additionally, there is an open talk page discussion immediately above the RfC, but the OP did not engage in discussion there, opting instead to start the RfC. Third, an RfC should consist of a succinct statement "so that the RfC attracts a clear and actionable response". In fact there are four requests for action -- all of which should have been discussed on the talk page first. Note also, that Action 3 has already been determined at AfD with speedy keep. Taroaldo (talk) 01:36, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]
per your request i have removed the formal Request for comment.
If you will so kindly provide an answer to questions 1 and 2, we can begin the discussion there.-- The Red Pen of Doom 09:21, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]

statement of subject of article and article title

What exactly is the subject of this article?

Currently according to the WP:LEAD, the subject is an spike in a google trending for an unusual phrase. If that is indeed the proper subject of the article, the name will need to be changed, and much content removed. -- The Red Pen of Doom 13:54, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Apart from the fact that there is absolutly no verifiable sources of humans coming back to life, I also fail to see what makes this notable? Three separate incidents of similar behaviour does not warrant a wikipedia article Alphaswitch91 (talk) 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I dont think anyone is seriously promoting an article about people actually coming back from the grave. But there was a lot of chatter on the internets using the metaphore of "brain eating zombies" for the acts of cannibalism that occurred in the end of May, and media coverage of the buzz on the internets, and so the "Zombie Panic of 2012" or "Cannibalistic attacks related to bath salts" or "Wingnuts with zombie fixation" or some other framing of the events could potentially be the subject of a legitimate article if some reliable sources happened to cover the events in a way that meets WP:N. (see Summer of the Shark where studies have shown that during a year of fewer shark attacks than normal, the media fixation on the attacks that did happen helped to greatly erode the public attitude toward sharks, and that has impacted the efforts to protect the species.) But what framing and which sources giving that framing substantive coverage have not actually been identified and incorporated into this article outside of gross violations of WP:OR/WP:SYN and WP:COATRACK. -- The Red Pen of Doom 20:16, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[]

It looks as though this article should either be scrapped completely and replaced with an article in a similar style to the Summer of the Shark article. As you say the article is currently in violation of WP:OR/WP:SYN and WP:COATRACK. Alphaswitch91 (talk) 11:19, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[]

I have added further comments in the section below. Taroaldo (talk) 08:04, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Thanks. But could you provide what you think is an appropriate lead sentence to adequately introduce and encapsulate what the article is about / why it is notable and what the title should be to reflect the same? -- The Red Pen of Doom 12:05, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]
Sure. I'll work something up and post it here for discussion. Taroaldo (talk) 22:30, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Returning to the former list and bath salts

In a former version of the article (archived here) I organized the incidents in list form which I think works better since there were something like 4-6 big and because as sections which end up being a WP:COATRACK

The other big thing I think we to do is include a section on bath salts which are presumed to be the cause. CartoonDiablo (talk) 21:16, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Before you put any amount of work into the article, it would be better to participate in the discussion to determine what exactly the topic of the article is. See above. Once that is decided, then editors can actually evaluate what is the best method of presenting the appropropriate information. -- The Red Pen of Doom 21:53, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[]
and regarding bath salts, at this time I think it is pure speculation about whether they were invovled in ANY of the incidents. Do you have any sources documenting their actual involvment? -- The Red Pen of Doom 21:55, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[]

I think for now we should implement Cartoons's archived version of the page as it is significantly better than the current policy violating mess we have now. After this has been done we should work out which incidents should be included in the list and whether bath salts is worth a mention. Alphaswitch91 (talk) 22:22, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[]

except that
1) the only thing that I think everyone can agree upon about the first AfD is that there was a consensus that zombie controversy was entirely made up subject that is not an appropriate article topic. (and that the result from the first AfD was seconded by the closer of the second AfD)
2) if you go in and actually look at the content of the sources, you will find that the claims and content in the article are NOT supported at all by the content of the sources, thus it is even a bigger violation of WP:OR than the current version, which although it strings together ideas and content to present / imply conclusions and connections not present in the original sources, in the current version at least the individual claims and content in the article are actually verifiable as being in the source material.
so, no. I don't support that idea. -- The Red Pen of Doom 00:53, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[]

I think article present name Incidents of zombie-like behavior in 2012 should be renamed to "2012 Cannibalism attacks in United states" or something else. Dr meetsingh  Talk  04:21, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[]

A few references would need to be added to the archived article which I will state here -

2012 Miami cannibalism incident, Rudy Eugene eats the face of Ronald Poppo. - http://www.guardian.co.uk/world/2012/may/30/face-eating-victim-stable-condition?newsfeed=true A manhunt is launched for Luka Rocco Magnotta, who is suspected of sending a severed body parts to different political parties in Canada. - http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-us-canada-18326432 Alexander Kinyua admitted to eating his roomate's heart and part of his brain in Maryland. - http://globalgrind.com/news/morgan-state-student-alexander-kinyuaadmits-eating-mans-heart-brains-zombie-apocalypse-details Wayne Carter cut his chest and threw pieces of his intestines at police. - http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/05/29/wayne-carter-threw-intestines-at-officers-stabbed-self-new-jersey_n_1554126.html

With these sources to back the article up I don't see how it would be violating any policies. The examples of sources I gave above are just from a quick search I'm sure that their are plenty more that could be used to verify the article. I think the title will have to remain the same though as their haven't been reports of cannibalism in all cases. Alphaswitch91 (talk) 14:08, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[]

and again, we are back to needing to define what exactly the topic of this article is to be able to determine if the suggested content and sources is within Wikipedia's policies of WP:OR / WP:SYN or if it is just Wikipedia editors stringing together stuff they think has a connection or is interesting. -- The Red Pen of Doom 15:41, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Going back the idea that Zombie controversy or Zombie apocalypse isn't the issue, wouldn't these sources say otherwise:

They all clearly link the events as well as the controversy to the unified theme of a Zombie "apocalypse" or "controversy." CartoonDiablo (talk) 19:08, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[]

How about "2012 zombie controvosy" it works as the title and the general topic. Alphaswitch91 (talk) 20:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Are you actually reading beyond the headlines of the articles? For about the millionth time, these sources say ZERO about any type of a "zombie controversy" and the AFD overwhelmingly concluded that "zombie controversy" is a non-starter for a name or topic of the article.
And if you actually read the articles, the only thing they say about "zombie apocalypse" is that it was a high trending term on google search for one part of one day. That is not valid coverage of a subject allow a Wikipedia article.
Yes, they mention a number of cannibalistic acts that happened during the same week, but they specifically call out that the events are not related
We can only report what the sources support, connected in ways that the sources connect them Unrelated cannibalistic crimes of 2012 or CDC confirms no zombie virus are likewise non-topics.-- The Red Pen of Doom 01:50, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]
your comparison is completely inapplicable. To start off with there is no standalone Reaction to War of the Worlds (radio drama) nor Reaction to fictional newscasts and furthermore the sources all explicitly connect the incidents specifically to the broadcast of War of the Worlds.
A more apt comparison would be like trying to create an article Bad traffic day based on multiple news stories that covered how horrible traffic in Cleveburg was today because Center Bridge is closed to construction (adding references to the history of the construction project), a deadly accident of an overturned bus which closed North Bridge during rush hour (adding reference to several stories about the deaths of the children) and the South Town Faire which had South Bridge closed for the annual parade (several stories about the historic fair).
Yes there are several reports in reliable sources that specifically talk about "bad traffic" and mention the three incidents. Yes there is lots of twitting about the traffic. But if there is no significant coverage of Bad Traffic Day itself, that isnt a valid article. Currently there is nothing other than passing mentions that there were several unrelated cannibalistic events that happened to occur within a short window of time. -- The Red Pen of Doom 11:16, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]
It's hardly "apt" when you are comparing the mundane to the highly unusual. Taroaldo (talk) 22:27, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]
Then replace the bus roll over with an escaped elephant, the bridge construction with an asteroid strike and the parade with a gang of escaped criminals. But my highly unusual situation is STILL not worthy of an article for Bad traffic day and the very sources that you want to use state quite clearly "people do horrible things to each other on a daily basis" and "Fact is, horrible crimes happen all the time.".-- The Red Pen of Doom 23:43, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[]
Sure but "zombie"-like crimes do not happen every day and the media/internet does not trend an escaped elephant weeks after it happens nor create maps of where the elephant might go to nor ask the highest government body with regards to animals about whether or not this has a serious impact. CartoonDiablo (talk) 23:07, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[]
If your position is that something entitled "Signs of impending zombie apocalypse" is anything other than pure entertainment, then I have no reason to continue to pretend to believe that you are actually acting or capable of acting in the best interest of Wikipedia and this "discussion" is completely over. -- The Red Pen of Doom 23:36, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[]
Not a single person here is claiming that an actual "zombie apocalypse" is happening. However, there is an internet/media sensation around the idea which is noteworthy and is different then something like a car crash or escaped Elephant. I'd question your own WP:COMPETENCY if you seriously entertained that idea, especially when me and other editors put down "causes" for a media fascination.CartoonDiablo (talk) 01:24, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
you cannot have it both ways, claiming that "no one is saying there is an actual zombie apocalypse" and then trying to use as a reliable source one that frames its content under the banner of "impending zombie apocalypse" -- The Red Pen of Doom 02:44, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
show some sources that back your claim that the internet sensation is noteworthy. All we have now is a claim that "zombie apocalypse" was a top trending google search term for one morning. And the "causes" that you and others have put down are pure WP:SYN making connections and claims and inferences that are not directly stated in the source material.-- The Red Pen of Doom 02:27, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I'm saying no editor thinks there's an actual zombie apocalypse especially since the words "impending" were never in the article nor any source for it. However there is paranoia and sensationalism which is a real topic, it's why the original title for it was "controversy."
To your other point, It's not the fact that that it's an "internet" sensation but a sensation in general, you're essentially asking for proof of noteworthiness for multiple internet sources that themselves show something noteworthy. If it wasn't noteworthy there wouldn't be multiple sources talking about it. That or you missed the part in all the sources the mentioned that it was trending; like no one is using a Google trends url as a source, CNN, AP, RT etc. were all saying it was a top trending topic which obviously shows that it's noteworthy. Plus it's not limited to searches, The Daily Beast and Newsweek are the sources that created that map and it even reached the CDC because of how widespread the sensationalism was.
And secondly I doubt an article from the AP would count as WP:SYNTH which from what I can tell was the only source used to explain the sensationalism around the issue.
At any rate I think the article should be about the incidents and the sensationalism around them as a "zombie apocalypse" scare. It's also why I think at least we should reinstate the old list to give reference to the attacks in some kind of readable format. CartoonDiablo (talk) 05:15, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
that would be all fine and good if we were able to SYNTHesize the content of the articles to create our own subject. But as you yourself state, there are not sufficient reliable sources that actually cover your suggested topic sensationalism around the so called zombie attacks of 2012 - I have looked for something similar and THE SOURCES ARE NOT THERE. and if sensationalism is the subject of the article, then by all means any detail of the incidents themseles is irrelevant - our sources would be describing how overboard and puerile those descriptions all are. (and sorry for misrepresenting the map as using the word "impending" - it uses the even more weaselly and insipid "may be the precursor to a zombie apocalypse.")-- The Red Pen of Doom 05:38, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
see Summer of the Shark to see that there are subjects of media sensationalism that DO get the significant coverage OF THE SENSATIONALISM and the impact the sensationalism had (loss of tourism dollars, setback in public perception of sharks and protective efforts) swithout Wikipedia editors creating the topic. -- The Red Pen of Doom 05:45, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
What I said was there weren't stories on internet stories of trends, there are however just stories of internet trends. I think that would obviously count as sensationalism or perhaps better words to use are panic or controversy etc.
The structure ought to be a list of "zombie" incidents, the reaction to them, and causes for the reaction (ie the AP article). CartoonDiablo (talk) 06:02, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
the sources do not say anything other than a single sentence that for one part of one day one of the highly ranking google search term trends was an unusual phrase. please stop SYNing. the structure ought to be a topic sentence about the subject of the article that can be supported by more than passing comments about the subject as identified in the topic sentence. followed by more content specifically about the subject of the article which doesnt require wikipedia editors to string together sources to make or imply connections that the original sources do not explicitly make.
please provide your suggestion for what the topic sentence should be-- The Red Pen of Doom 06:14, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Fourth Incident

There was a guy in Florida who got naked and ate off a chunk of another guys arm. I think this should be added. Here are some sources: http://www.nydailynews.com/news/national/florida-zombie-attack-naked-man-storms-girlfriend-house-bites-chunk-man-arm-article-1.1099760 http://www.heraldsun.com.au/ipad/us-man-strips-naked-bites-off-chunk-of-mans-arm/story-fnbzs1v0-1226405622503 http://www.digtriad.com/news/local/article/233180/57/Police-Taser-Naked-Man-After-Eating-Another-Mans-Arm http://datelinenews.org/charles-baker-another-zombie-eats-flesh-of-jeffrey-blake-in-miami/99874 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.9.138.28 (talk) 03:33, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]

despite numerous requests for people to present their options, we have not actually come to any kind of agreement as to what the subject of this article is, and therefore it is premature to discuss whether or not the sources cover this incident in a way that makes it relevant to the article. Note that just cause |things look like they might be connected, Wikipedia editors cannot add them willy nilly - reliable sources must interpret and present them in an encyclopedic manner. -- The Red Pen of Doom 04:55, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Not to be rude or anything, but isn't this article about citing the acts of cannibalism that happened in the summer of 2012. It's a weird phenomenon, kind of like the Summer of the Shark. This is one more incident, and it adds to the outbreak of cannibalism. I think adding more incidents, (that have actually happened) would add to the quality of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.9.138.28 (talk) 13:11, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]

But that is not an an analysis that we can make and place into an article. The subject and scope of Wikipedia has to have been determined by outside reliable sources. -- The Red Pen of Doom 16:31, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
But aren't things like the new york daily news and dateline news reliable sources? It was even mentioned on Conan last night. Although I do understand Conan may not be a reliable resource. And I think we can choose to put other incidents of cannibalism onto the article, especially since all of those articles call the man a zombie. If there are twenty more cannibalism incidents this summer, are we just going to ignore them because you don't want to change the article? Wikipediman23 (talk) 18:21, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
In general they are reliable sources, but only as sources for content that comes from analysis that is specifically made and wholely contained within the particular story in that source. We cannot string things together and make connections that they do not. And until we can decide on what specifically the topic of this article is, we cannot know if what is in those sources directly connects with this article or if we would need to stretch beyond what they have specifically analysed. Unrelated cannibal attacks of 2012 is not a valid encyclopedic topic. And if it was the topic of this article, then we couldnt include the Miami case because the autopsy showed that he didnt commit cannibalism. People who bit each other is even MORE ludicruous.-- The Red Pen of Doom 18:25, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I see what you're saying. We shouldn't add anything to the article until we completely know what the subject is, and how all the events tie together. If not, really unrelated things could be added and the whole article is a bunch a different stories. That is what you're saying, right?Wikipediman23 (talk) 18:32, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]
Correct. -- The Red Pen of Doom 18:34, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]

I understand all of that, and I don't think anything should be added at this point either. But just for the sake of being correct, the guy did bite off a chunk of another mans arm, and when the cops came, they tried to use stun guns on him, but he seemed immune to them. Kinda zombie-like. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.9.138.28 (talk) 18:45, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[]

new Incident

Michael Terron Daniel arrested for strangling, eating neighbor's dog:

By Associated Press, Updated: Wednesday, June 27, 9:23 PM

"WACO, Texas — Bond has been revoked for a Texas man who police say killed and starting eating his housemate’s dog after chasing a neighbor on his hands and knees while growling.

Police say Daniel told people at the home he had taken K-2, a form of synthetic marijuana, then assaulted them and started biting the dog’s flesh."

http://www.washingtonpost.com/national/texas-man-accused-of-starting-to-eat-housemates-dog-killing-it-while-on-synthetic-marijuana/2012/06/27/gJQA8rUr7V_story.html

μηδείς (talk) 02:15, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]

until the actual subject of this article can be identified and agreed upon adding "additional incidents" is premature. Per the current topic sentence the new incident is irrelevant as it had no impact on the buzz that caused the "zombie apocalypse" search blip back in the beginning of the month. Although it is, like the others, entirely unrelated. -- The Red Pen of Doom 02:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I am not aware that I had added this material to the article. μηδείς (talk) 02:15, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
If you did not intend to add it to the article, then we can remove this section. This page is for discussing how to improve the article and not for discussing zombie attacks. -- The Red Pen of Doom 02:26, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
You might do well to read WP:OWN, WP:AGF, and WP:CIVIL while you are at it. I'll not be responding to you further outside the context of a wider discussion. μηδείς (talk) 02:37, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
So I am still unclear - do you want to discuss adding this to the article or do you just want to discuss it? -- The Red Pen of Doom 02:56, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
I have added the material for the future reference of myself and other interested editors. I am not aware of any other article where additional incidents of zombie-like behavior would be relevant. μηδείς (talk) 03:31, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
Well thank you! Can you help come up with a lead sentence that encapsulates a topic wherein the topic specified is covered by reliable sources in a non trivial manner that would be able to incorporate the incident that you have found? -- The Red Pen of Doom 04:18, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]
and now after reading the article, i would like to suggest Weird unrelated criminal acts involving biting things that have been linked to drugs based on rumor hearsay and wild speculation. What do you think? -- The Red Pen of Doom 04:29, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[]

Cannibal attack in China.

(There seems to be a strict guidline as to what could be included in this article, so I'll let the "proper" Wikipedians decide wether this is any good. I hope these article are enough, though there are more.) http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/asia/chinese-cannibal-attack-caught-on-video-as-drunken-bus-driver-chews-off-womans-face-7903914.html http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2167493/China-cannibal-attack-Drunk-bus-driver-leaps-woman-street-chews-face.html http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/world-news/cannibal-attack-china-drunk-bus-1111517 http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/07/01/face-eating-attack-china-drunk-bus-driver-chews-_n_1641217.html 92.7.111.9 (talk) 10:42, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[]

there is no connection to what the current topic sentence describes as the subject of the article: the three unrelated attacks that lead to spike in search for "zombie apocalypse" in early June . see WP:COATRACK and WP:SYN. If you can develop a topic/subject sentence that is supported by reliable sources that would legitimately encompass this incident, feel free to suggest it here. the Independent might support a move to 2012 face chewing incidents and a re-write of the article-- The Red Pen of Doom 11:11, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[]
Does the current topic sentence really describe the article? Because there is only two sentences about the "Zombie Apocalypse". The article is mostly about recent acts of cannibalism, (which I personally think the articles subject should be). If there was more about the zombie apocalypse, I think people might stop asking to put up new incidents. Wikipediman23 (talk) 13:37, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[]
No one has offered a better sentence. Do you have one? If so, please offer your suggestion up above Talk:Incidents_of_zombie-like_behavior_in_2012#statement_of_subject_of_article_and_article_title or else trim the crap out of the article which doesnt belong. I have tried, but it keeps getting put back in.-- The Red Pen of Doom 13:38, 3 July 2012 (UTC)[]
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